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Ragnar grunts and steps forward. You wave him back, thus prolonging Edmund Rochester's continued existence for the moment.
Ragnar grunts and steps forward. You wave him back, thus prolonging Edmund Rochester's continued existence for the moment.
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"Madam Speaker, I can assure you that ''[Name]'' came into possession of those uniforms quite lawfully. They were gifts from our chivalry made to celebrate ''[Gender]'' courage."
"Madam Speaker, I can assure you that Rhapsody came into possession of those uniforms quite lawfully. They were gifts from our chivalry made to celebrate her courage."
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"That may be," the speaker replies, "but I fear that the honorable leader of the opposition is right. Wearing a knight's uniform doesn't make one a knight. The spirit of the law is clear. I must ask you to leave this chamber, madam, or be removed."
"That may be," the speaker replies, "but I fear that the honorable leader of the opposition is right. Wearing a knight's uniform doesn't make one a knight. The spirit of the law is clear. I must ask you to leave this chamber, madam, or be removed."
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You look over at Lady Hollister. She doesn't meet your gaze. Her eyes are focused on the little datapad in her hand.
You look over at Lady Hollister. She doesn't meet your gaze. Her eyes are focused on the little datapad in her hand.
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"One moment!" she says. She looks up at you, smiles, then turns to the speaker. "I've received word from His Majesty King Vencelas. ''[Name]'' and ''[Gender]'' companions were knighted."
"One moment!" she says. She looks up at you, smiles, then turns to the speaker. "I've received word from His Majesty King Vencelas. Rhapsody and her companions were knighted."
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"What? That's ridiculous! I demand to know-"
"What? That's ridiculous! I demand to know-"
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"Silence!" the speaker cries. The crack of her gavel echoes her demand. "Lady Hollister, I'm aware of no such awards being made."
"Silence!" the speaker cries. The crack of her gavel echoes her demand. "Lady Hollister, I'm aware of no such awards being made."
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"It happened rather recently, Madam Speaker. In fact, the titles had to be bestowed in absentia, since ''[Name]'' and the others are..."
"It happened rather recently, Madam Speaker. In fact, the titles had to be bestowed in absentia, since Rhapsody and the others are..."
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She pauses, as a quiet bleeping comes from the speaker's direction. The bulldog face frowns as she reaches into the pocket of her robes and withdraws a datapad. She inspects the screen, then grins for the barest fraction of a second before stifling the show of merriment and smothering it with a more appropriate expression.
She pauses, as a quiet bleeping comes from the speaker's direction. The bulldog face frowns as she reaches into the pocket of her robes and withdraws a datapad. She inspects the screen, then grins for the barest fraction of a second before stifling the show of merriment and smothering it with a more appropriate expression.
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A face appears on the gigantic screen at the end of the aisle, above the entrance. It's that of a young man, a stranger. Yet the features are familiar. Shane Vortex. Once heir to Twisted Steel, made its owner by Ragnar's axe. A man with untold wealth at his disposal, with contacts across the galaxy -- politicians in his pocket, dangerous killers at his beck and call.
A face appears on the gigantic screen at the end of the aisle, above the entrance. It's that of a young man, a stranger. Yet the features are familiar. Shane Vortex. Once heir to Twisted Steel, made its owner by Ragnar's axe. A man with untold wealth at his disposal, with contacts across the galaxy -- politicians in his pocket, dangerous killers at his beck and call.
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"You hear them, ''[Name]''? You hear the fans? Well, I hear them too! You want a war?"
"You hear them, Rhapsody? You hear the fans? Well, I hear them too! You want a war?"
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The crowd roars.
The crowd roars.
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"But our requests went unanswered," the red one adds. "We were told that you no longer left your laboratory."
"But our requests went unanswered," the red one adds. "We were told that you no longer left your laboratory."
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"That was the case, before ''[Name]'' piqued my interest."
"That was the case, before Rhapsody piqued my interest."
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"What did you mean, when you said we would issue the fatwa?"
"What did you mean, when you said we would issue the fatwa?"
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A lithe form touches down beside you. A brutish one lands with a weightier thud.
A lithe form touches down beside you. A brutish one lands with a weightier thud.
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"You okay, ''[Name]''?" Talia asks.
"You okay, Rhapsody?" Talia asks.
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You murmur something. More blood than voice spits from your mouth.
You murmur something. More blood than voice spits from your mouth.
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