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There's a stretch of wide road beyond the landing pad. On the right it runs alongside the palace wall, and will take you to its front entrance. There it's clear, kept sacrosanct for your passage. But on the left there's clamor and commotion. It's filled with throngs of civilians that seethe and surge against the line of soldiers who hold them back, trying to maintain order and keep them away from the fray. One of the uniformed men sees you, and yells.
There's a stretch of wide road beyond the landing pad. On the right it runs alongside the palace wall, and will take you to its front entrance. There it's clear, kept sacrosanct for your passage. But on the left there's clamor and commotion. It's filled with throngs of civilians that seethe and surge against the line of soldiers who hold them back, trying to maintain order and keep them away from the fray. One of the uniformed men sees you, and yells.
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"The Jian! Lady/Lord [Player Name]!"
"The Jian! Lady Rhapsody!"
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The cry ripples through the crowd. It becomes a chant, a shout, a torrent.
The cry ripples through the crowd. It becomes a chant, a shout, a torrent.
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"But..." Telemachus' widening eyes make him look so young... "I thought we were all going to Alpha Centauri!"
"But..." Telemachus' widening eyes make him look so young... "I thought we were all going to Alpha Centauri!"
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"What Lady/Lord [Player Name] proposes makes sense," Wu Tenchu replies. "Once Alpha Centauri is attacked, the Centurians may try to retaliate by massacring the populations of the worlds they still occupy. It's wise to ensure their safety before that can happen."
"What Lady Rhapsody proposes makes sense," Wu Tenchu replies. "Once Alpha Centauri is attacked, the Centurians may try to retaliate by massacring the populations of the worlds they still occupy. It's wise to ensure their safety before that can happen."
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You drop to one knee in front of the boy, place your hands on his shoulders.
You drop to one knee in front of the boy, place your hands on his shoulders.
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The Secretary-General of the UHW is barely recognizable at first. His hair is puffy and disheveled. It's as though someone's detonated a bomb in the middle of its customary voluminous neatness, and scattered it in all directions. His bushy moustache is equally disheveled -- you'd never imagined that particular word applying to a moustache, but apparently it can. There's a burgundy dressing gown around his thin frame, and he looks to be in a rather modest office instead of the ornate chamber he commands at the UHW HQ.
The Secretary-General of the UHW is barely recognizable at first. His hair is puffy and disheveled. It's as though someone's detonated a bomb in the middle of its customary voluminous neatness, and scattered it in all directions. His bushy moustache is equally disheveled -- you'd never imagined that particular word applying to a moustache, but apparently it can. There's a burgundy dressing gown around his thin frame, and he looks to be in a rather modest office instead of the ornate chamber he commands at the UHW HQ.
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"Lady/Lord [Player Name]," he begins, in his high and fruity voice, "I've received word from Councilor Dule of the Centurian Collective."
"Lady Rhapsody," he begins, in his high and fruity voice, "I've received word from Councilor Dule of the Centurian Collective."
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Ah... So that's what's dragged a man like him out of bed.
Ah... So that's what's dragged a man like him out of bed.
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"His terms aren't accepted. Tell him to expect us soon."
"His terms aren't accepted. Tell him to expect us soon."
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"No!" The secretary-general's eyes flash. His moustache dances with the force of the exhalation. "Lady/Lord [Player Name], in the name of the UHW I order you to stand your forces down. There will be no attack on Centurian space. Such an act will be regarded as illegal military aggression, and bring down the full sanction of-"
"No!" The secretary-general's eyes flash. His moustache dances with the force of the exhalation. "Lady Rhapsody, in the name of the UHW I order you to stand your forces down. There will be no attack on Centurian space. Such an act will be regarded as illegal military aggression, and bring down the full sanction of-"
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"Should have killed him when we were on Earth," Ragnar growls.
"Should have killed him when we were on Earth," Ragnar growls.
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Again and again the scene plays across your mind. You feel your thumb pressing the red buttons at the ends of the control sticks, see the Centurian escape pods exploding -- flashes of brilliant fire against the black of the void. The sounds of their destruction, spawned within your aural implant, rage in your ears like an accusation.
Again and again the scene plays across your mind. You feel your thumb pressing the red buttons at the ends of the control sticks, see the Centurian escape pods exploding -- flashes of brilliant fire against the black of the void. The sounds of their destruction, spawned within your aural implant, rage in your ears like an accusation.
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"[Player Name]!"
"Rhapsody!"
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That voice... From the corridor.
That voice... From the corridor.
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The energy field is gone.
The energy field is gone.
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"[Player Name]!"
"Rhapsody!"
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She appears at the bars, her white dress shimmering. Joy and relief flow across her beautiful face. Princess Illaria...
She appears at the bars, her white dress shimmering. Joy and relief flow across her beautiful face. Princess Illaria...
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