Editing LotS/The Story/Scaean Gates/Black Skies over Sian
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Surprise overcomes her awkwardness, prompting her to restore eye contact. | Surprise overcomes her awkwardness, prompting her to restore eye contact. | ||
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"Milady | "Milady? I don't understand." | ||
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"I'll be overseeing the battle from the war room. The bridge is yours." | "I'll be overseeing the battle from the war room. The bridge is yours." | ||
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"Directing the fleet will take all my attention. I'm sure I can trust you to keep us from being destroyed while I do that." | "Directing the fleet will take all my attention. I'm sure I can trust you to keep us from being destroyed while I do that." | ||
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"Yes, milady | "Yes, milady! Of course, milady!" | ||
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This time she settles for a bow of her head. You return the gesture, then make for the door at the back of the bridge. | This time she settles for a bow of her head. You return the gesture, then make for the door at the back of the bridge. | ||
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The young captain looks up, then salutes with such force that her head rocks backwards from the impact. | The young captain looks up, then salutes with such force that her head rocks backwards from the impact. | ||
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"Yes, milady | "Yes, milady?" | ||
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"Captain Silea!" Wu Tenchu says. "The proper form of address to an Imperial Jian during a state of combat readiness is 'Lord Commander', regardless of sex!" | "Captain Silea!" Wu Tenchu says. "The proper form of address to an Imperial Jian during a state of combat readiness is 'Lord Commander', regardless of sex!" |